Within a Pale White Light

me again

Wed, 09 Apr 2008 23:30:41 GMT

Ok here's some more art. I colored the Jazz Soundwave pic I drew.
Also for all of those that wonder. I will update portaits...one of these days. work is really kicking my ass. In fact i should be
sleeping now instead of posting. I gotta get up at 2am.
So night

Fan Art

Mon, 10 Mar 2008 01:19:59 GMT

Here's a piece I did as bribery for DarkAngelLillith to continue working on her Transformers/Buffy crossover.
I did the pencil awhile ago and just now got around to coloring it. I must say I'm rather happy how it came out.
I'm still learning my computer art program so it can be a long process with each new work I do.
I'm also trying to teach my sister. Not sure how that will go. She's a great artist...but she's rather...um how should I put this.
She's a very straight line kind of artist. Hell she never took art in school cause she didn't want the teachers to tell her what to draw or do.
She hardly ever tries to learn new tricks or skills. I'm actually surprised she took up my offer to try and show her the computer program.
here's hoping for the best with her. She's got so much talent I'd hate to see it wasted.
Ok ANY WHO
here's the link to DarkAngelLillith's FF main page. The Buffy Xover is mentioned in the bio and a link given.
Comment on it and push for more. The new chapter made me squeal (I ain't kinding. I squealed.) but I want more.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1090415/

Got to my Deviant to see other works as well as the large version of this. I shrunk it a bit and it probably got distorted a bit.
http://gloriastone82.deviantart.com/

I should also mention Istarrunner. It was a certain comment given by this great writer that actually got me off my ass to color this. :P
So thanks. I needed the push.

reviews for chapter 10

Fri, 29 Feb 2008 11:40:45 GMT

YO.
First off I'd like to say I'm surprised at some of the responses to the twins. A few people saying they were mad at how they were being treated.
This sort of confuses me. The twins had been on earth 40 odd years. Yet they weren't at the battle where they could have very well turned the tides. If the twins had been at mission city, Jazz very well might have survived. Hell the Allspark might have.
Sunny and Sides are not in the right here. Doesn't matter how much you love them.
Oh and for those that asked. I'm not translating what Sunny says. Hell I don't think I even remember what he says. There are translation engines on the net for free, go at it. :P

Soaringphoenix86: Thank you for another great review. Glad you liked the italian. With the twins they are wrote about so often and sometimes so well (cough-Jux series-cough) that I felt they needed something extra. Thus Sunny refuses to speak english.

When I wrote the wrench in I didn't think it was going to be so well recieved. My beta loved it too.

I felt bad that I didn't get any Mikaela and bonecrusher stuff in this chapter. But my beta said this was a good stand alone. So I figured what the hell. It allows me to update sooner giving me more time to write.

NightElfCrawler: Ok so you had given up? What's wrong with Jack and Ratchet? I think because of those stories by Ryagelle that everyone is just assuming that Ratchet and the twins are IT. Don't get me wrong I aboslutely love those stories. Its actually interesting to see how one author can change things like that. At least I think Ryagelle did. I don't remember any twins/Ratchet stories before that one.

Mdnytryder: Its not so much they don't know. Its that they don't care. Or rather Sunny didn't care. Also they might have been on earth but they didn't spend anytime figuring out the fleshies. they kept to themselves and pretty much ignored humans. Sides knew for exsample that they were fragile. He didn't know how much force it would take to kill one. He never tried to kill one. These two are aliens so their range of experiences are outside the human one. Everything about us, even the fact we breath the air would have to be something they learned.

*looks at the time* Holy crap I gotta go. I am currently east of Cleveland and will be in NY later today. It's cold and snowing here.

fanart

Tue, 12 Feb 2008 20:41:13 GMT

Fan art I've drawn. Most of its just kind of sketches, although I did color the claire pic. When I get home in a few days I'll draw some more.

Bonecrushers shell. He's holding a rubber hammer and a bucket of cleaner...uh I don't know why.

Also i gave him a colts shirt cause they are in Indiana and Hoosiers are nuts for Colts

GO Colts.

*grumble* It sucks we didn't make it to the super bowl this year, oh well at least a Manning did win even if it wasn't ours.

This is Claire, Simmons exwife. Expect to see more of her. She's fun to write.

Grimlock the sparkling. I'm annoyed cause I tried to find pictures of the protoforms from the movie but couldn't find any. Well I guess this is good enough. The rat on his shoulder my sister named Ratrap.

Transformers alt modes

Mon, 28 Jan 2008 06:44:20 GMT

Finally took the time to look on the internet and find out what everyones alt modes are.
I found pictures but not in the right colors. So I'll have to ask you to use your imagination...please.
Um ok first off.....

Bluestreak: 1978 Datsun, he's a light blue/grey color the pic I found is actually silver so pretty close:P

Wheeljack: tow truck, medium duty. Um guess I never explained but Wheeljack is smaller than Optimus but larger than Ratchet. Wheeljack is mostly Green and white, with some red highlights.

Springer: Caddy Escalade/Cobra attack helicopter. Springers almost all green, just different shades for contrast.

Arcee: Edo porche carrera gt. Now this car is a concept car if I'm reading it right. However I love it and for some reason I just see as Arcee being one of a kind. :P She's pink and silver with Chrome highlights. Also I decided on a porche in honor of Jazz. The Soltice is ok, and I understand why they had to chose it with the sponsership and everything but damn it Jazz is a PORCHE!

Well anyway this car just screams beauty, grace and deadly intent at me. Color it pink and there's Arcee in a nutshell.

Prowl: Dodge Charger, he's a cop as well. Orginally he was going to be G1 colors but damn I kind of like this light blue color. Hmm decisions decisions.
I guess it doesn't matter. Oh and if anyone cares this is a cop car from Michigan. Those cops get nice rides.

Thoughts on Reviews for Portaits

Sun, 27 Jan 2008 16:19:47 GMT

My thoughts on some reviews sent. No spoilers but some stuff to think about...maybe lite hints. Stuff like that :P

Lilyoftheval5: I've already sent a message, but just again I'll say I didn't take offense. I thought my summary sucked as well

Soaring phoenix86: You're a great reviewer. I love the reviews that actually say more than just 'great story update' what does that tell me? Nothing. However your stuff actually tells me what you think about several different points. It helps a lot to know what people like and dislike about a story. Heck that's what reviews are for. I look forward to more great reviews from ya.

Byrnstar: Ah another great reviewer. yes I agree its sad that Wheeljack has to fight for his babies. Prejudice of any kind is horrible, more so with innocent lives such as a child. And thanks you on the comments about Simmons. I also think he's a neat character. Quirky and fun. He's more than just a government stooge. It really annoys me when people use him as a bad guy in stories. Its enough that I usually stop reading. I think the only story I didn't stop reading was one called Format. But that story is so great I couldn't stop I won't say which story I'm thinking of, but there was this one. It was interesting, fun story that suddenly out of nowhere Simmons pops up does some bad stuff and becomes the bad guy. I stopped reading it. need to take it off my story alerts. Not to offend or anything, this is my own opinion but using Simmons is sort of lazy. If you want the government to be the bad guy create your own character. We've already seen Simmons in this light, been there done that.

Hmm I'll tell you this about your post on chapter 5. The Allspark did change things. But not in the way you'll be expecting. And for those wondering NO Sam is NOT the Allspark. Its an interesting concept but sadly its been overdone to the point I kind of shy away from stories featuring this. Sam has not been changed or effected in anyway. There is something going on but it is not a AllsparkSam or whatever people call it. You should be proud Bynstar. You are the soul reason why I continued on Springers path in chapter 7. Originally I wrote this long thing about how he'd just gotten a virus and it wasn't his fault. He was a little uncomfortable around the sparklings but he wasn't the ass I ended up making him. Hell I had him and Arcee get together in the first draft. However I sat back and wasn't happy with it. Seemed to sappy and happy. I'm not a happy feel good writer a lot of times. Heck just reading my Trigun story Checkmate and that'll tell you a lot about me. :P it was your reviews that had me go the direction I did. I hated making Springer such an ass, I like him I do. It didn't fit my perception of him, then again this is my story so I'll do as I damn well pleased. So I changed my thoughts on Springer and made him a jerk. Or rather like Arcee says, He's a good bot, he just has some issues to work out.

Violet Light: Glad you like Claire :) I got a huge kick out of writing that. Can't wait till its time to write more. There are a couple of directions I can take Claire. Haven't decided yet which one I'll take, which is why she hasn't shown up again yet. But believe me you'll see more of her (probably bugging the hell out of Simmons)

SoaringPhoenix86: No Glass doesn't know where Bonecrusher is. Err...Well maybe I shouldn't say that. Hmm I can't say anything without giving something away. Ok how about this, they are not an issue right now. Claire took care of them. They won't cause problems at the moment so don't worry about it.

ArmoredSoul: Aw!Look it the little sparklings!

So CUTE!MUST HUG!!

*is smacked by Ratchet*

R: ><

Me: @.@ *faints*

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHaa Allspark above I love this!! Laughed my ass off first time I read it. Its hilarious and cute and oh so true. *snicker* Reviews like this have influenced me. Originally the sparklings were just going to be there. They just kind of showed up, did their thing and were going to be forgotten into the background. However everyone seems to love them so much. I'm writing them a lot more. See reviews matter. Tell me what ya'll want. Nothing is written in stone. I change, my stories change.

Hmm well this is enough for now. I got way to many reviews to comment on them all. I'll try to keep this updates so check back often.

Whats new pussycat.

Sun, 27 Jan 2008 15:34:49 GMT

Going to try and get this up and running. Never really messed with a livejournal before.
My plan to make this a place where people can have fun with my fanfiction.
Look for orginal stuff as well when I get around to it.

Hello Everyone!

Tue, 20 Mar 2007 23:31:17 GMT

So like Hi! This is my first posting.

Um I haven't been a fan of one piece long, although I'd like to think my love of it makes up for noticing it so late. Actually I blame the dubbed version as the voice overs are horrible!

I still can't get my brother in law to watch One piece because he watched 5 minutes of that crap. anyway, I always did like the actual story from the episode I saw but it took me awhile to actually look it up on youtube and watch.

Well I think for my first posting I'll add a fanart. Especially since no ones commented on it from Deviant art (curses)
I'm very proud of this and it makes me sad that its only gotten like 7 views or something like that.
its actually based off a story by Raihne
http://community.livejournal.com/luffyzoro_yaoi/138672.html?thread=962992

Um I haven't actually gotten word back yet whether the author LIKES my picture...but surely they don't mind. At least I hope not after all this is like free advertisement

This is my second attempt with my art program after learning the wonders of transpatent layers.
Every here I created from scrap.
for a better view my deviant addy is http://gloriastone82.deviantart.com/

Well that's it for now. I'll show more art later as well as some of my fanfics. Maybe I'll get a better reception here.

Peace